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结构单一句：I'm Li Hua. I'm a middle school student. I'm from China.
修改句：I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China.
结构单一句：You practice more reading, you will improve your reading ability.
修改句：If you practice more reading, you will improve your reading ability.
对策：学会恰当使用连接词、同位语、非谓语动词、短语等对结构单一的英语句子进行合并，进行简单句和复合句的转换训练，逐步掌握较复杂句式。
高考英语作文满分作文
Dear Bob,
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
天下最伟大的爱，是父母的爱。母爱是纯洁的，天底下的所有妈妈，都有一颗最虔诚的爱心。在妈妈淡淡的外表下，却隐藏着真挚的爱。
我的妈妈长着一双圆溜溜的大眼睛，一头乌黑的头发夹杂些许银丝，瘦瘦高高的，也许是为我操劳过多的缘故。
天下没有妈妈不关心自己的孩子，我的妈妈同样如此。
记得今年国庆节放假上来开学第一天，我突然生病了。中午快吃饭时，我感到很不舒服，在教学楼忍不住呕吐了。老师知道后立即通知了爸爸。于是妈妈很快将我接回家，让我下午在家休息、看玻从学校回家的路上，因为风很大，妈妈就将自己的大衣脱下给我披上。回家后我仍感到不适，又在家吐了多次。妈妈感到很焦急，急忙喂我吃药，直到爸爸下班后带我去看了医生。医生说，我这是急性肠胃炎，只要打一两次点滴就会好，但首先需要在屁股上打一针以止呕，并开了些药。于是连续两个晚上，妈妈都陪我在医院打点滴。我生病的这一周，妈妈每天中午都接我回家，并耐心做做我喜欢吃的菜，给我熬稀饭吃。看到我的病情终于得到控制，逐步好转，妈妈的脸上终于露出了笑容。
我的妈妈每天除接送我外，还要在厨房里忙上忙下，总是变换着花样，做各种各样好吃的菜给我吃。
我的妈妈就是这样，总是为我操心，不断关心我的生活，不断鼓励我，激励我。总之，妈妈为我付出的心血，为我付出的爱，是难以衡量的。我一定要做一个好学生，以报答妈妈的恩情。
我的手在触摸灵魂最深处的呢喃！我生来偏爱大自然，爱花草树木，爱风雨雷电，爱冰霜雪雨……更爱天地精华的巧手所雕琢出得世间万物。每到初秋，我的手总是在不经意间寻找着，寻找着一切灵与美的切合体。我的手贴在白嫩的杨树皮肤上，我听见它在呢喃，蓬勃的的生命力仿佛要冲破树干，爆发出来，像火山爆发一样，燃烧所有激情。于是我悄悄地用手记录下了这庞勃的生命力！
我的手在抚慰落叶归根的痛楚！我并不善良，我喜欢这落叶的凄凉。一片片金黄的落叶以一种“哀婉”的姿态缓缓降落在万物之根上，便仿佛是一只只断了翅的蝴蝶，纷纷扬扬地哀老、掉落，然后死掉与泥土化为一体。但我知道，这些落叶并不欣喜，而是悲哀自己的衰败。因为我触摸到了落叶的一根根神经，每一根神经都在颤动，每一根神经都在诉说着自己的心酸。于是我静静地用手记录下了这令人落泪的心酸！
我的手在感受激动的心跳！每一个期盼的日子，我总是热情高涨。因为我期盼了好久好久的一套塔罗牌终于飞越千山万水来到了我的身边。我想，你一定是听到了我的召唤吧。我没有预期的泪流满面，只是伸出手贴在心口上，听着心跳的声音、感受那份久违的激情。于是我轻轻地用手记录下了这代表着生命的心跳！而当时的我却混混不知，在未来，这套终于到手的塔罗牌会陪着我去世界的背面，我想，这是唯一一种生命的遗憾了！
我的手在包容寒冰！我不顾屋外的严寒，披着一件单薄的外套便跑下了楼。一地的洁白！我用手轻掬一捧雪，感受到了冰冷，感受到了刺骨，但更感受到了专属于雪的那份清凉。于是我淡淡地用手记录下了这雪的清凉！
十指翻飞着，缠绕出经年的寂寞，阐述出灵感的真理，用楔形文字记录下了这一切！
我用我的手，书写我的心！
除了深远的太空，最广阔的宇宙在哪里？ 除了绚烂的春天，最美丽的世界在哪里？ 答案只有一个—你心里！ 哲学家康德说过，这个世界最伟大的奇迹：一是我们头顶璀璨的星空，二是每个人的内心世界。
不论是男还是女，是成年人还是孩子，你的精神，你的情感，你的思想，你的心灵都是有史以来创造出最伟大的奇迹。 可遗憾的是，并不是每一个心灵都都会得到完美的展现。 我们有时烦恼，有时苦闷，有时抑郁甚至有时焦虑，原因只有一个，古人称之为“情郁之中”，用现代心理的语言，那就是“情感得不到正当的发泄”。 其实，正当有效的宣泄渠道有很多，我喜欢拿起笔来，把我所想、所感、所悟欢快的写下来，我热爱我手里的笔，它就像一部挖掘机，能够不停地掘出深埋在你心底的定期，它又像源头的活水，流出字字句句，汇成江海河流，它还像黎明的启明星。 在人生的道路上，要珍惜每一个陪你看风景的人，或许下一转角，便会挥手告别，只为在流年逝去的时光里，蓦然回首，还有那份时光给予的暖意。 一条路能多少坎坷？一颗心能容下多少悲喜？一个故事能有多少个轮回？一段光阴能包容多少曾经？生命的旅途总会分分合合，光阴的转角总会来来去去，时光，跌跌撞撞，生命浮浮沉沉，一个转身会带走多少过程，一眼回眸会有多少沧桑？ 评语：我手写我心，我用我手中的马良神笔写出了我的心语，立意很好，语言缺乏文采，写字清秀。
Good morning !
It is really my honor to have this opportunity for a interview,
I hope i can make a good performance today. I'm confident that I can succeed.
Now i will introduce myself briefly
I am 26 years old,born in shandong province .
I was graduated from qingdao university. my major is i got my bachelor degree after my graduation in the year of 20__.
I spend most of my time on study,i have passed CET4/6 . and i have acquired basic knowledge of my major during my school time.
In July 20__, I begin work for a small private company as a technical support engineer in QingDao I'm capable of more responsibilities, so I decided to change my job.
And in August 20xx,I left QingDao to BeiJing and worked for a foreign enterprise as a automation software test I want to change my working environment, I'd like to find a job which is more challenging. Morover Motorola is a global company, so I feel I can gain the most from working in this kind of company ennvironment. That is the reason why I come here to compete for this position.
I think I'm a good team player and I'm a person of great honesty to others. Also I am able to work under great pressure.
2014高考英语满分作文
【作文题目】
最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。
60%的同学认为
40%的同学认为
1.不应该收门票
2公园是公众休闲的地方
3l如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象
1.应收 门票，但票价不要太高
3.购新花木
注意：1.信的开头已为你写好。
2.词数：100左右。
3.参考词汇：门票---entrance f ee
【范文】
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either a t home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the par k and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.
With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?
Yours truly,
【译文】
再勇敢的人也有绝望的时候。
再坚强的人也有脆弱的时候。
再自信的人也有自卑的时候。
当你疲惫的双腿横跨在成功与失败的门槛；当你淡淡的足迹踏过无人问津的驿站；当你滴血的心陷入迷惘的深渊；当你的付出化作午夜的辛风……你到底在企盼什么？此是多么希望有人将我从黑暗中唤醒过来！
老师，您还记得吗？当我在您的鼓励下，我胆怯地从座位上起身，在众目睽睽之下结结巴巴的回答问题时，您向我投来了鼓励的目光。
老师，您还记得吗？当我回答完问题后，您的一句句“不错！”，“有进步，还需要在努力啊！”……使我心中美滋滋的，我开始从自卑到自信，开始不论天涯地北的畅谈起来。
老师，您还记得吗？当我安于现状，过于满足，而知足不进时，感谢您的一语惊醒梦中人：前方有更美丽的风景，你何必贪恋路边的野花而止步不前呢？
老师，你还记得吗？当我认为自己以是一把拉满了的弓时，已经没有能力在去挖掘，又是您提醒了我：人的潜能是无限的，努力吧！加油吧！你一定可以去饱览前方更美丽的风景的。祝你百尺竿头，更进一步！
老师啊，正是有了你一路的鼓励，一路的提醒，一路的关心，才能让我找回了遗失已久的自信。中华学子千千万，像我一样的学生有多少人在啊，他们都受到了老师的呵护和关心，正在茁壮成长！老师啊，正是有了您“差生中才有了瓦特，巧木中才长出爱迪生”！
感谢您，感谢我的恩师！我心底对您寄托了深深的恩情，那颗波涛澎湃的心，千言万语道不尽，甜言蜜语讲不完……
我的心中怀着一颗感恩的心，写下此文，借以表达我对恩师的感激……
1、上海英语作文题目
假如你是明启中学的高三学生李华，你邀请王磊参加露天音乐会，但是王磊拒绝了邀请，因为路途遥远，交通不方便的原因，不想去郊外公园参加露天音乐会；
1、针对李华的犹豫不决给出解决的答案；
2、给他来参加露天音乐会的理由。
2、上海英语作文点评
写作部分要求考生写邮件说服好友，任务真实，考查了考生的语言交际能力。试题全面考核了考生的语言知识和语言能力，既体现了课程标准的基本要求，又凸显了对考生在不同语境中灵活运用语言能力的考查，对高中英语教学起到了积极的引导作用。
上海英语试卷命题依据英语学科考试说明，难易度适切，区分度合理，测量目标明确，与以往考试保持一致。试卷内容围绕人与自然、人与社会、人与自我三大主题，综合考查英语语言运用能力，突出学科核心素养，凸显思辨能力的考查，彰显人文学科的本质。
爸爸妈妈我想对你说，谢谢这些年来你们对我的关心与关怀，我知道你们不管做什么都是为我们好，可是你们要理解一下我。
记得那是上二三年级的时候，你们每天都来接送我，可是在路上的时候看见同学们没让家长接送，许多同学都结伴而行在路上有说有笑的，我心里真羡慕。终于在我四年级的时候，由于你们的工作繁忙所以让我自己回家，我很高兴。但是你们还规定了时间让我在规定的时间回家，有一次由于老师布置的作业我没写完，所以我回家就有一点晚了，可你们就不分青红皂白的打我，我知道你们是为我好，害怕我因为玩而不回家了，可你们就不听我解释一下，就让我和你们一起回家了。
有一次，去舅舅家的时候我看见了一个毛绒玩具，我爱不释手的拿着，你们知道了就让我放下，你们说一直玩玩具会耽误学习，我说玩一会儿就好了。你们只好答应了，可还没过五分钟，你们就说回家吧，回家还有事呢，于是我就极不情愿的和你们一起回家了。
还有一次，我凭着记忆画了几幅画。本想多画一些自制一本画册，可您进来就说：“如果把你的画画时间用在学习上该多好啊，你却偏偏把时间浪费，去画一些无聊的图画。”我正要向您解释，您毫不手软地把它扔进了火坑，此时我的心凉透了。
妈妈，您可知道那天您扔的、烧的是什么吗？今天借我写作文的机会告诉您：您扔的、烧的是我的童年呀！学习固然重要，但是孩子的快乐，您不能不给予啊！妈妈，您真的不该！不该啊！
爸爸妈妈请你们以后一定要多理解我一些啊！
【全国卷II】
【作文题目】假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括：
1. 时间：周五晚8点至9点
2. 地点：学生俱乐部
3. 内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等
4. 要求：备小礼物
注意：
1. 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3. 答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上。
范文1：
Hi, Susan,
We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming's birthday. We'd like to invite you to the party. We want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about it. We'll gather at the Students' Club at 8 pm this Friday, after the evening classes. And it's going to last about an hour. We each will prepare a little present. When he comes, we'll light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” together for him. Then the cake will be cut and we'll sing songs and play games. It'll be nice to see how excited he will be. I'm sure you'll have a good time at the party, too.
范文2：
We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming’s birthday. I hope you can come and join us if it is convenient to you. The party will take place on Friday evening from 8 . to 9 . at the Students’ Club. During the party, we’ll sing “Happy Birthday” to him with the candles on. I am sure Xiaoming will be very happy and moved. After that, we’ll cut the birthday cake prepared for him in advance and share it together. What’s more, we decide to play some games afterwards. By the way, don’t forget to prepare a little gift when you come. I am sure we’ll enjoy ourselves together.
We are looking forward to your coming.
范文3：
We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming’s birthday. I hope you can come and attend it from the bottom of my heart. The party will be held at the Students’ Club from 8 p. m. this Friday and it will last about one hour. Now that it is a surprise for Xiaoming, you’d better prepare a little gift when you come. The party will begin with a “Happy Birthday” song, wishing Xiaoming happy and healthy. When the song is over, we will enjoy the delicious birthday cake. Besides, we’ll play some games for pleasure. I am sure everybody will have a good time and regard it as an unforgettable experience.
About Me
I'm a middle school student. My name is . I am fifteen years old. I'm going to have a very big and important exam in June, which will be a turning point in my life. Although my school work is very busy, I still spend some free time listening to the music. It makes me feel relaxed. I don't have many hobbies, but I can play the piano pretty well. When I feel sad or lonely, I am going to play a little piece of music.
My grade is just so so, but I'm not worried. My parents always say that I'm lazy. Actually I just like to live in my own way. On the weeekends, I usually sleep until ten o'clock. As a girl in this age, I love shopping and pay more attention to my dresses. I even can go outside and play a whole day and don't feel tired.
I do not only like sleeping but also like eating. Hot and spicy food is my favourite, so I often get pimples.
That's me, not smart, but kind, not beautiful, but outgoing. I enjoy my original lifestyle.
我是一名中学生。我的名字是。我十五岁。在六月我将有一个非常大型重要的考试，这将是我生活中的一个转折点。虽然我在学校工作非常忙，我还是花一些空闲时间听音乐。这让我感到轻松。我没有太多的爱好，但我可以很会弹钢琴。当我感到悲伤或孤独，我要弹一小会钢琴。
我的成绩也不过如此，但我并不担心。我的父母总是说我很懒。其实我只是想有自己的生活方式。到了周末，我通常一觉睡到十点钟。就像一般在这个年龄段的女孩，我爱购物，更注重我的衣服。我甚至可以去外面玩了一整天，也不觉得累。
我不仅喜欢睡觉也喜欢吃。辛辣食物是我最喜欢的，所以我经常得到丘疹。
这就是我，不聪明，但善良，不漂亮，但开朗。我喜欢我自己的生活方式。
我的语文成绩在班里算不上最优秀的。在语文学习之中，我最值得与大家分享的，就是作文了。
曾经的我一度十分害怕写作文，一提到作文就十分抗拒。有的时候，一篇命题作文能让我熬上两三个小时，并且质量也并不高，这给我的语文学习带来了很大的困难。我练习写作的方法主要还是写日记和大量阅读。
从五年级开始，我坚持每天写日记。我发现，每一天都有各种不同的新奇事件在等待着你将它们一一描绘，就像画家笔下神奇的小精灵，跃然纸上。日记没有限制，随心所欲。这样写多了，文字就会变得十分流畅，下笔如有神助，想写什么都是信手拈来。
阅读，对于一个人来说非常重要，对于作文来说也是一样。阅读，就是要什么都读，把知识面放开阔了，把喜欢的句子多读几遍，直到会背。散文、小说、诗集，甚至歌词，只要自己喜欢，我都会看上无数遍。爸爸妈妈曾说我，“看了几百遍，都要会背了”。
当然，我也没有放弃看我最喜欢的漫画，甚至看得比其他的书还要认真，还要细致。一般的小说，都是让读者看着它优美的文字，想象它精彩的画面，游走在它的字里行间。可是漫画不一样，它让我们看到的是画面，而文字则要自己去构思，去想象，天马行空的想象。这就好比给你一幅画，让你看图构思并写话，但这是一整本漫画书，相当于要你写一部小说了。真正认真看漫画的人，是能从漫画中悟到许多的：能看到人情，能看到科学，能看到正义。
当我觉得不想看书的时候，我往往会去看一看自己喜欢的歌词，体会作词者在作词的时候的心情。一边哼，一边看，心情会从学习的紧张之中放松出来。不管歌词是正能量的，还是失落感伤的，都能让我的脑海中浮现出一幅幅画面，身临其境，并有想将这种感觉表达出来的冲动。我想如果表达出来的话应该就成了作文了吧。
我想我的作文其实就是我的生活。我在写我的生活，我在生活中学我的语文。
Imagine a typical student named Lucy that has to get up early to attend extra courses on weekends. First, she went to Pudong to have a skectching lesson. Then, she has to ride the car back to Songjiang to attend a music course. Hours were spent on transportation, but she only learn few things. We all have experiences like that. Transportation between places wastes much time and we should avoid them. Today, we're going to talk about why it's such a big problem and the possible solutions to it.
Firstly, a huge amount of people's time was spent on transporting. According to , citizens spend one-fourth of thier time in average on tranportation. This lower our efficiency and the knowledge we could learn. Secondly, transportation makes children bored and unhappy. According to , long periods of transportation may have impact on students' memory and arithemetric. Again, this makes us learn less things in the same amount of time, not more.
The best solution to this problem is to learn more online at home. Firstly, we can schedule our own learning at home. According to , students can manage their study time as they want and they can be more effective when learning. This lets us improve our efficiency and learn how to manage our time. Secondly, we can just stay at home and waste no more time on transportation.
In conclusion, if we study online, we can improve our learning efficiency the most. Online courses also have a advantage because it's cheaper and it have proffesional teachers. More and more students will choose to learn online in the future.
评分标准
1、本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分
2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定是否达到及格线(15分)，然后确定其所属的具体档次，以该档次的要求来衡量，最后给分。其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。
4、评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5、若缺少要点，分数降一档处理。
6、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
7、书写较差以至于影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。
满分作文 Advertisement 广告
请根据以下提示,以Advertisement为标题,写一篇词左右的英语短文.
广告成了人们生活中不可或缺的点缀
有的广告走向极端
你对广告的看法
Possible version:
Advertisement广告
Advertisements appear everywhere in modern society. When you walk along the streets, you can see large boards with pretty girls smiling at you. You read newspapers, and see half of the pages covered with ads. You turn on TV, and you see commercial advertisements again. Whether you like it or not, advertisements fill your life.
In order to attract more customers, advertisements will sometimes go to extremes. Advertisements use every possible means in producing their announcements. For example, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will employ an actor to sit at a table and eat up their seemingly delicious food product while they film him.
为了吸引更多的顾客，广告有时会走向极端。广告在制作公告的过程中使用各种可能的手段。举例来说，要做广告，广告主会雇用一位演员坐在一张桌子上，吃上他们在电影中的美味食物。
Although advertisements enable you to make decisions quickly, sometimes they can cause lots of trouble. There are always many of them and they make you forget what you are sitting there for.
虽然广告让你快速做出决定，但有时他们会给你带来很多麻烦。他们中有很多人，他们让你忘记你坐在那里的。
高考英语满分作文 学校要不要组织学生春游 The school should organize students outing
春天是旅游的好季节,某外国语学校校长要求各班同学就春游一事展开讨论.讨论的主题是:学校要不要组织学生春游.校长还要求班长就讨论的情况用英语写一封信给他.
假定你是某班班长李华,请你根据下列表格中的信息客观地介绍讨论情况.
注意:1,信的格式已为你写好;2,词数:100左右;3,生词:拓宽 broaden
70%的学生赞成春游
30%的学生反对春游
1. 可以领略大自然的优美风景;
2. 拓宽视野,增长知识;
3. 呼吸新鲜空气,有益于身体健康.
1. 时间紧,耽误学习;
2. 增加父母经济负担;
3. 担心安全.
Dear Headmaster,
I'm writing to tell you the discussion we've had on whether the school should organize a spring outing for the students.
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had on whether the school should organize a spring outing for the students.
Opinions on the question are pided as follows:70% of the students think that the school should organize the spring outing. They believe that the spring outing can make them enjoy the nature's beautiful scenery, which can broaden our vision and fill us with more knowledge. They also say that the air in the open fields is fresher. What's more, fresh air does a lot of good to our health.
On the other hand,30% don't like the idea of going out for a spring outing. In their opinions, time is very precious, so they have to grasp every minute to work hard at their lessons. Traveling costs a lot. In that case, it will add to their families' burden. Above all, no one can be sure of the safety of every student.
Yours truly
尊敬的校长，
我写信告诉你关于学校是否应该组织一次春季郊游的讨论。
对问题的看法有如下：70%的学生认为学校应该组织“春季郊游”。他们认为，春季郊游可以使他们享受大自然的美丽的风景，它可以扩大我们的视野，使我们更多的知识。他们还说，在空旷的田野的空气很清新。更新鲜的空气对我们的健康有很大的健康。
另一方面，30%不喜欢外出郊游的想法。在他们的观点中，时间是非常宝贵的，所以他们要抓紧每一分的努力，在他们的课程中努力学习。旅游成本很多。在这种情况下，它会增加他们家庭的负担。首先，没有人能确保每个学生的安全。
你真正的
中考英语作文范文：如何建立一个更绿色的城市 How to build a greener city
浙江义乌中考英语作文范文：义乌作为一个国际商贸名城，吸引了越来越多的国内外游客来旅游购物。因此，建设一个绿色，文明的义乌显得尤为重要。请你以为题，写一篇短文。
参考词汇：environment duty,rubbish,plstic,pollution,plant
要求：（1）语句通顺，语意连贯，书写认真 （1）词数809左右。文章开头已给出，不计入词数
（3）可适当发挥（文中不能出现真实的人名和姓名）
As we know,Yiwu is an international
参考中考英语作文范文：
How to build a greener city
As we know,Yiwu is an international city. It attracts more and more people to come and do it's our duty to build a beautiful green city. As students,we shouldn't throw rubbish anywhere on the ground or use too many plastic bags. Ask the factories not to put waste water into the river and we'd better not go to school by car so that we can reduce the air pollution. What's more, we should plant more trees and flowers to make our city greener. Let's work hard for our city tohave a good environment.
如何建立一个更绿色的城市我们知道，义乌是一个国际城市。它吸引更多的人来这里做生意。所以建立一个美丽的绿色城市，我们的责任。作为学生，我们不应该把垃圾扔在地上的任何地方或使用太多的塑料袋。要求工厂不要把废水排入河中，我们最好不要坐汽车去学校，我们可以减少空气污染。更重要的是，我们应该种更多的树和花来绿化我们的城市。让我们努力工作，为我们的城市有一个良好的环境。
高考英语满分作文:My dear grandpa 我敬爱的姥爷
My grandfather is very kind to me. He loves me very much. I am the apple of his eye, but when it comes to my study he is very strict. Every day he spends more than one hour examining my homework. With his help, I have been doing well in my studies.
My grandfather is also warm-hearted to his neighbors and is always ready to help them. One day, a girl who is one of his neighbors injured her leg carelessly. My grandfather took the girl to the hospital at once and paid the fees with his own savings.
My grandfather is a kind and easy-going man, but now he is living in another city with my aunt. We all miss him very much and I hope that I can go to visit him soon.
姥爷很疼爱我。”他也非常喜欢我，把我视为掌上明珠。但一说到学习，他就对我极其严厉。每天他都要花一个多小时检查我的作业。在他的帮助下，我的学习一直非常好。
姥爷对邻居也很热心，他总是乐于助人。一天，邻家的女孩不慎伤了腿，姥爷马上带她去医院，并用自己的积蓄帮她支付药费。
姥爷是一个热心随和的人。现在他和我阿姨住在另一个城市。我们都很想他，我希望不久就能见到他。
高考英语满分作文 A Letter to the Headmaster
I am the minister of students' life in the Student Union. On behalf of all the students, I am writing to you to give our opinions about the canteen.
Our canteen has something satisfactory and something unsatisfactory as well. To our satisfaction, many kinds of the food are supplied to us. Besides this, the food is cheap and tastes good. We all enjoy the food. And the surroundings in the canteen have also been improved. But the quantity of a helping they give is not enough. The seats are not enough as students have no seats when eating.
Finally we advise them to improve the quality of the food and their service. We will feel very happy if these problems can be solved.
尊敬的校长：
我是学生会生活部部长。我代表所有学生给您写信反映一下我们对食堂的意见。
食堂有令人满意的一面也有令人不满意的一面；令我们满意的是，食堂给我们提供了很多种类的食物。另外，饭菜价格便宜，味道可口，我们很喜欢。而且食堂环境也已经改善了。但是他们给的食物的分量不足。食堂的座位也不够，一些学生吃饭时没有座位。我们希望学校会考虑增添些座位。
最后我们建议他们改进饭菜的质量，改善服务。如果这些问题能被解决我们会感到非常高兴。
尊敬您的
中考英语满分作文：visitng 参观
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to Heyuan, now let me introduce our city — Heyuan to you. Heyuan is a city with a long history. It is in the northeast of Guangdong and 198 kilometres away from Guangzhou. It has a population of 3,240,000.
There are many places of interest in Heyuan, such as Sujiawei Wanlu Lake and so on. Wanlu Lake is a beautiful place. The water is clean and not polluted. There are all kinds of fish in it. You can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic there. It is really a good place to spend your holiday. Besides, you can go and visit Heyuan Museum. There you can see a lot of dinosaur egg fossils.
I hope you can enjoy yourselves in Heyuan.
Thank you.
女士们,先生们,
欢迎来到河源市,现在让我向你介绍我们的城市——河源市。河源市是一个有着悠久历史的城市。在广东的东北部,离广州198公里。它有3240000人口。
在河源市有许多名胜,如Sujiawei，万绿湖等等。万绿湖是一个美丽的地方。水是干净的,没有污染。有各种各样的鱼。你可以去划船,钓鱼,野餐。这真的是一个好地方可以度过你的假期。此外,你可以去参观河源市博物馆。在那里你可以看到很多恐龙蛋化石。
我希望你能在河源市玩得愉快。
谢谢你们！
综观全国各地试卷结构，高考英语作文是分值仅次于阅读，是英语考试的重头戏之一，而且非常适合考前集中突破。高考英语作文题目历来都是情理之中，意料之外。
情理之中，是说高考英语写作永远都是学生话题、现实生活话题，也就是全体考生不论理科文科、男生女生、城市农村、应届往届，都会同样地有话可讲。
意料之外，是说高考英语作文题目经常与考生直接关心的社会热点话题无直接联系，但仔细琢磨，又会发现一些联系，就是说热点归热点，关键找角度。例如，经济危机是当前热点，_也总在讲信心比黄金更重要，可是怎样变成高考英语作文题?命题专家完全可以根据如下要点提纲命制这样一个题目：
1、生活中困难不可避免，面对困难需要信心
2、试举一例说明信心在学习方面的作用
3、你对困难的态度
根据这种思路，五位高考英语学科专家结合六个话题，在高考最后时刻，
为全国考生精心圈点高考英语作文。
一、几点重要原则。
1。智者利用押题，傻子依赖押题!
2。书面表达整篇背诵绝无必要，可以以看读为主，关键是从该讲义中汲取一些自己认为常用的积极词汇和表达，并能得体熟练地运用。考场上应变能力很重要!
【全国新课标卷I】
【作文题目】假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：
李明：高个子，戴眼镜
航班号：CA985
到达：8月6日上午11:30
1. 词数100左右;
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
范文：
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.
Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to Thank you in advance!
His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket.
Looking forward to your reply.
Overcome difficulties in learning English
I have had many difficulties since I started to learn English. Since I come from the south of China, I can not distinguish nasal sounds from non-nasals and they sound exactly the same in my dialect.
Thus, I had a hard time telling “night” from “light” at the very beginning. My poor memory also added to the difficulties when I decided to enlarge my vocabulary. English words were so elusive that I could only remember them for a while.
I have spared no efforts to overcome the difficulties and finally succeeded. In order to tell the slight difference between nasal sounds and non-nasals, I forced myself to speak mandarin everyday.
Whenever I started to speak English, I reminded myself the difference between “night” and “light”.
At first I felt it rather unnatural, but as I went on I was gradually accustomed to speaking in this way.
As for my wretched memory, I gave up mechanical memorization and tried many other new ways.
At last I found a most efficient way for me: memorizing English words by their stems and affixes. This is how I have overcome some difficulties in learning English.
我开始学英语时有很多困难。因为我来自中国南部，我分不清前鼻音和后鼻音而且在我们的方言中发音完全一样。
因此，一开始我很难分辨“夜”与“光”。我的记忆力也不好也是一个问题当我决定扩大自己的词汇量时。英语单词是如此难以捉摸的，我只能够记得他们一段时间。
我努力克服困难，最后终于成功了。为了分清楚前鼻音和后鼻音之间的细微差别，我强迫自己每天讲普通话。
每当我开始说英语时，我提醒自己区分“夜”和“光”的读音。
起初我觉得很不自然，但当我继续时我逐渐习惯于这样说。
至于我的不太好的记忆力，我放弃了机械记忆和尝试了许多新的方法。
最后我发现了对我来说一个最有效的方法：记忆英语单词的词干和词缀。这是我如何克服英语学习中的一些困难的方法。
Were I three years younger than I am now, I would strongly recommend that I set more practical and specific goals. As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass. Compared with many abstract objectives, practical ones can bring us more courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward. If only I could go back and reset my goals.
我现在比我小三岁,我会强烈建议我设定更实际和具体目标。俗话说得好,生活没有一个清晰的和可实现的目标就像航海没有罗盘。与许多抽象的目标相比,实际的能给我们带来更多的勇气和信心当我们使人进步。要是我能回去重置我的目标。
高考英语的写作部分是很重要的一种题型,在整个高考中占据20%的份额，并且具有作为主观题型的重要特点，与以选择题为代表的客观题型有着本质上的不同。
考生在准备作文考试时,往往不知所措。笔者认为,针对高考作文的自身特点，可以从以下方面进行准备。
第一,注重卷面给阅卷者的印象
卷面印象包括：字体要清晰，行距要适当，大写字母大小适中，尽量不要出现涂改。
因为高考阅卷是按档次给分，如果卷面很难看，必然会影响整体的档次分数，而一个档次就相差5分。
同样，很多涂改会造成阅卷者疲劳的眼神更加无所适从，最后吃亏的还是考生自己。
第二,注意审题
对于考试作文来讲，写作的唯一目的就是尽量符合题目的要求，让自己写出出题者希望看到的东西，而绝对不是妄求文采，写出一些不着边际的东西。
比如，高考英语Ⅰ就从来没有要求考生写议论文，而是多次让考生描写或记叙某事，其实也就是提出文体要求。
再如，有的题目要求考生写回复的信件，那么考生就一定要很明白地表明这是一封复信，否则就属于不切题。
第三,要在适当的地方展示自己的语言水平
高考英语Ⅰ的目的是考察语言，所以，考生必须在考官最容易看到的位置，写出比较高级的词汇、句型或者使用一些修辞手法，以期得到更好的评价。
比如文章的开头，就不应该出现很简单的语法错误，这些都是在检查时应该避免的错误。
不但如此，考生还要让考官看得见自己较高的语言水平，才可以获得满意的分数。
笔者在广州新东方学校执教高考写作以来，深感责任重大，唯有兢兢业业，以上是一些体会，以就教于大家。
[高考英语作文书写卷面]
Dear Mr Black,
Please find enclosed my CV in application for the post advertised in the Guardian on 30 November.
The nature of my degree course has prepared me for this position. It involved a great deal of independent research, requiring initiative, self-motivation and a wide range of skills. For one course, an understanding of the [ sector] industry was essential. I found this subject very stimulating.
I'm a fast and accurate writer, with a keen eye for detail and I should be very grateful for the opportunity to progress to market reporting. I'm able to take on the responsibility of this position immediately, and have the enthusiasm and determination to ensure that I make a success of it.
Thank you for taking the time to consider this application and I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Yours sincerely,
Mile
Dear Professor,
I am greatly grateful that you can spare some time to read my letter. I am a Chinese undergraduate from _, which is one of the top 10 universities in China, and I will graduate in 20xx. After that, I want to continue my education by pursuing a master degree in France.
I am now in the department of _. My primary interest is in international commerce, and I notice that ESSEC is on top of that field, so I decide to exert myself to get in. Your research in “cross-cultural relationship marketing”, especially your publications on business of China as well as Southeast Asia, are of particular interest to me. And I would like to deal with business between Europe and China in my career. (Motivational model )That's why I seek entry to your theme. During my university years, I am used to working in a team environment. For example, I was administrative vice minister in Student Union, and organized and schemed activities along with competitions in university. For my excellent job, I gained the scholarship for entertainment and physical education activities. After passing College English Tests 4&6, I turned to learn French last year and I got a score of 463 in TCF. I am preparing for IELTS currently, and if GMAT is necessary for applying master degree in ESSEC, I shall take the test after the IELTS test.
With so much admiration and enthusiasm, I hope I would have the opportunity to work under your supervision. If admitted, I am able to continue working along the lines of your present research.
Thanks for your kindness and consideration.
Yours sincerely, _
投诉信
Dear ______,
①I am ______(自我介绍). ②I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about.
③The reason for my dissatisfaction is ______(总体介绍). ④In the first place, ______(抱怨的第一个方面).
⑤In addition, ______(抱怨的第二个方面). ⑥Under these circumstances, I find it ______(感觉)to______(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果).
⑦I appreciate it very much if you could ______(提出建议和请求), preferably ______(进一步的要求),
and I would like to have this matter settled by ______(设定解决事情最后期限). ⑧Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
建议信
①You have asked me for my advice with regard to ______ , and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.
②In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ______(建议的内容).
③I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Li Ming
请求信
Dear ______ ,
①I am writing to formally request to ______(请求的内容).
②The reason for ______is that ______(给出原因). ③I ______ , so I ______(给出细节).
④I would also like to request ______(提出进一步的要求). ⑤I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.
⑥Thank you for your attention to these requests. ⑦If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at ______(电话号码).
⑧I look forward to a favorable reply.
求职信
Dear Sir or Madam,
My best friend
My best friend is Xiao Yi. She has short hair. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. She is tall and thin. She lives on the tenth floor of a tall building. There are five people in her family.
Xiao Yi likes to do sports. She likes to play badminton and volley ball. Her favourite color is pink. Her favorite food is fish and vegetables, because they are healthy. Her hobby is reading books and riding a bike. She often plays the computer or goes shopping on the weekend. Sometimes we go to KFC together. We go there by car.
I like my best friend—XiaoYi. We are good friends
我最好的朋友是小伊。她短头发。她有两只大眼睛和一个小嘴巴。她又高又瘦。她住在一个高层建筑的第十楼。在她的家里有五个人。
小伊喜欢做运动。她喜欢打羽毛球和排球。她最喜欢的颜色是粉红色。她最喜欢的食物是鱼和蔬菜，因为它们是健康的。她的业余爱好是读书和骑自行车。她经常玩电脑或周末去购物。有时我们一起去肯德基。我们坐车去那里。
我喜欢我的最好的朋友小伊。我们是好朋友。
书信作文模板
Dear X X X， 亲爱的X X X
I am extremely pleased to hear from you.(我很高兴收到你的来
信) And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____. (我很高兴写封信告诉
你。。。) I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience. (我希望你可以在空闲的时候尽快给我回信)
Best regards for your health and success. 祝你身体健康万事如意
Sincerely yours，你最真诚的X X X
X X X
In the Sunday, me and my family to Yancheng Spring Park to play. To the Spring and Autumn Park, I saw a beautiful rockery seat, there is water flowing out of the mountains. To the Confucian Scholars 100 homes, we can see a statue of Confucius and his students study the statue. We then walked to see a 4D show homes, which we see the _Legend of Yancheng City,_ three-dimensional movies.
Entertainment subject area in spring and there merry, canyon rafting, fly so high and other titles. We play a canyon drift, where the hardships, hair-raising, the water will cool from time to time in our body. Then, my father and I play a high-altitude flight, while it increased side spin, turn my head spin. About, and I even cardinal points are not quite sure of.
Me and my family came to the water recreation area, there are water plum pile, water single-plank bridge, water chains ... chains ... I play in the water, I stood two chains, and felt a little flustered, afraid to move forward walk, then father, mother's encouragement, I adjusted the tempo, getting faster and faster, soon went to the shore.
Today, we are having a great time, Yancheng Spring Park is truly our paradise!
审题的概念
拿到试卷后，首先浏览书面表达的题目，研究题目要求。正确的审题内容包括A、审标题B、审体裁C、审要点。审标题：看文章是否要求有题目(title)或者主题(topic)能够确保你不跑题;审体裁：确能够定文章的文体，为你写作提供方向。审要点：如果英语作文中，有要求要点的，一般打分时是踩点给分的，准确把握住要点，是高分的一个诀窍。
如何审要点?要做到以下两个方面：
总结归纳要点：不是所有内容都要写出来，而是抓住其中的关键要点、衔接要点!
理顺要点：将提炼的要点按逻辑关系(如时间关系、因果关系、转折关系等)重新安排，这样整篇文章看起来就整体有序，流畅自然，更加容易打动评分老师，从而作文分数提升一档。
构思文章提纲：根据题目的要点，安排好段落和主次关系。要形成良好的分段意识，写作分段是必须要进行的(2至4段为佳)，这样显得文章不会拥挤并且层次分明。在行文意识上，要注意突出要点。
【全国卷I●新课标卷】
【作文题目】假设你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：
1.本人简介;
2.求助内容;
3.约定时间;
4.你的联系方式(Email：lihua@;phone：12345678)。
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3.结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir / Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I'm writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I'm anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number: lihua@; 12345678.
Look forward to your reply.
Yours
Dear Sir or Madame:
I have read your advertisement in yesterday’s China Daily. I feel I will be fit for the job needed in your company. I’m 20 years old and in good health. After graduation from a middle school, I have studied English for six years. I studied bookkeeping, typewriting and public relations. I am good at both operating a PC and English. I can read, write, listen to and speak English. I’m interested in the position of a secretary.
I want very much to be accepted by your company. I’ll work hard if I can be a member in your company.
(姓名)
亲爱的先生或女士:
我在昨天的《中国日报》上看到了贵公司的招聘广告。我觉得我能胜任贵公司需要的工作。我今年20岁，身体很好。从中学毕业后，我已经学了六年英语了。我学过簿记、打字和公共关系。我擅长操作电脑和英语。我能读、写、听、说英语。我对秘书这个职位很感兴趣。
我非常想被贵公司接受。如果我能成为贵公司的一员，我将努力工作。
高考满分英语作文
I live in a city, since I was small, I witnessed all thethings happened in this city.
我住在一个城市，当我很小的时候，我目睹了发生在这个城市的一切事情。
Now, in my eyes, after so many years, the city haschanged so , the transportation hasbecome fluent.
现在，在我眼里，交通变得便利。
Many years ago, there were less bus stations, peoplealways needed to changed their lines by many cars.
很多年以前，公共汽车站点很好，人们总是需要通过换车来改变路线。
But now, almost all the places can be reached by bus, people don't need to change the line.
现在，几乎所有的地方都可以通过公交车到达，人们不用改变路线。
Second, the buildings are enlarging, this reflects the city's economy develops fast.
第二，建筑正在扩大，这反映了一个城市经济的快速发展。
Indeed, I can go to many newly built public places to have fun, some are for children, some arefor the old,
确实，我可以去很多新建的'公共场所玩，一些是给孩子的，一些是给老人家的，
all of these are good for people's communication. The city's change reflects people keep pacewith time.
所有的这些对于人们的交流是有用的。城市的改变反映了人们与时俱进。
【全国新课标卷II●大纲卷】
【作文题目】一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文。
1.家庭;
2.工作;
3.业余生活。
3.开头语已为你写好。
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I’ll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I’ll do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I’ll continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I’ll travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.
星期四的上午，赵老师让各组组长评功次，根据功次评选下周的值周生，我心里紧张极了，真怕“名落孙山”。
紧张的评功活动在老师的一声令下开始了。我抬头看去，学习好的同学胸有成竹，中等的同学则一会儿认为自己能评上，一会儿又认为评不上，在那里“瞎折腾”，学习差的同学一脸不以为然，心想着反正没指望了，便干起了别的事。我焦急万分的坐在椅子上，椅子像有钉子一样，我一会儿站起来向组长问最新情况，一会儿又在地上直跺脚，不过，组长告诉我一个新消息，我的功次竟然有144功，太不可思议了，我使劲打了自己一下，好疼呀！不是做梦，太棒了！
可是经过打听，有很多同学的功次比我还多，有的已经达到了200多功次，我不由地在心里打了一个问号“我当值周生有指望吗？”
下午，开完班会，赵老师开始评值周生，我的心被提得高高的，心里像有一只小兔，跳个不停，我能选上吗？但因为时间关系，老师突然宣布星期五评选。
值周生，我能评上吗？
评选值周生后
“耶，我当上值周生了！”我在心里暗暗高兴。
我一扭头，大家都怎么了，看着他们，我也对没选上的同学叹息。“上次评上值周生的同学站起来”，赵老师话音刚落，我们二十几个人齐刷刷的都站起来了，老师接着问“想把值周生名额让出来的同学请举手”，刷一下子，有几个同学举手了，我犹豫不决，值周生我也想当啊，但又一想，自己毕竟已经当过一次了，有很多同学还没有当过，他们多么期待呀！不如把名额让给他们吧！
于是，我心情沉重地举起了手，“胡航鸣让了！”赵老师说着在我的名字后画了一个三角，我低下头，难过极了，但想着那些第一次能当上值周生的同学，该是多么兴奋和高兴啊！我的心情又好过了些。“张心怡让了！”什么，我没听错吧！她可是全班最高功次的，让了多可惜呀！我一扭头，才发现她热泪盈眶，再看看我的好朋友杨宇森，他也为让出了名额而流泪不止呢！
我扭过头，一股热泪也涌了出来，这是热情的泪，感动的泪，又是祝贺的泪。
评选完后，我心里一点也不难过，因为我把机会让给了更需要的同学。赵老师后来给我们让出名额的同学每人奖励5功，其实，我想说“老师，我们不需要，这是我们应该做的。”
妈妈的话：儿子你做的很对，妈妈能理解你当时的心情，值周生一个学期也许只能轮一次，谁不想当啊！你能把这次机会让给其他同学，这是难能可贵的品质。我相信当上的同学一定会感谢你们！妈妈相信你一定会表现更出色！好样的，孩子！
评分细则
优秀(22--25)：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容充实;语法结构多样，词汇丰富，行文流畅，显示出较强的语言运用能力，允许有个别语言错误，但不影响意思表达。
良好(18--21)：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实，行文较流畅，语言有少量错误，但基本不影响意思表达。
一般(15--17)：紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点，语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确;基本达到预期写作目的。
较差(11--14)：要点不全，内容不完整，行文不够连贯;语言错误较多，半数句子基本正确。
差(6--10)：内容混乱，或主要内容偏离主题，尚能够写出少数与内容相关的可读句。
极差(0--5)：只能写出与内容相关的词语，没有有效信息;抄写其他文章，或只是写出与作文无关的内容。
英语作文：三点关键定档因素(不跑题是前提)
词汇多样性
语法复杂性
文章连贯性
My name is Chen was born at Taizhou,Zhejiang in March, began my schooling at Huanshan Primary School and learned there for six years. After that I entered Taizhou Middle School in 1996 and graduated in the autumn of the same year I was admitted to Zhejiang University,majoring in English in Foreign Language also studied Chinese,politics,history,geography and computer photos and swimming are my 's more,I am skilled in typing and I once won the first prize in the typing contest in English held by our college.
我的名字是陈炜。女。我于1983年3月出生于浙江泰州。我在环山路小学开始上学，在那里学了有六年。之后，我于1996年进入了泰州中学并在2002年毕业。同年的秋天，我被浙江大学录取，在外语学院专修英语。除此之外，我还学习了中国，政治，历史，地理和计算机科学等科目。绘图，拍照和游泳是我的爱好。更重要的是，我擅长打字，我曾经在学校举行的英文打字竞赛获得一等奖。
1. 外观(尺寸、颜色、材料)
2. 象征意义
3. 价格
3. 开头已为你写好。
Dear Tom,
How are you doing? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. InChina, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information. Thank you!
明代公安派作家有着这样的为文之风：“为文必独具一格，不拘性灵，非以自己的胸臆流出，不肯下笔。”在我看来，这便是对“言为心声”的最好诠释。
你心中汩汩然流淌着的是什么，你笔下流淌出的也应是什么。怪侠金圣叹有二十四个“不亦快哉”流传于世，那便是他的心中所想着的人间愉快。但现今社会或者说是古今社会上总有艺术家不能使其为人与作品相称的现象，究其根源，原因大致分为两种。
一类是作家在虚名浮利之中失去了自我，沦为了全为稻梁谋的“作家”。李绅因为写《悯农》而闻名内外，却不想他后来竟成了一个奢侈无度的豪绅，他的为人也就不能与诗中所云相称。另一种情况便是难言了，虽有“物不得其平则鸣”之说，但在一定的社会压力下，有时“鸣”却是极为困难的。李贺诗中雄奇的想象，奇诡的诗风看似另类，却恰恰包含了他怀才不遇之悲愤。至于晚唐李商稳，其眼中的蜡烛泣泪也是他的胸中之苦闷，只是无法直接诉诸笔端。
曹丕《典论·论文》中有言，“大丈夫见意于篇籍，寄身于翰墨，不假良史之辞，不托飞驰之势，而句声自附于后。”在科技发达言论自由的今天，我们应强调“我手写我心”，而不是无病呻吟或是穿蠹经史，一个现代公民应能够并且能够恰当地发出自己的声音，用文字指点江山。
现今社会已基本没有“难言”的限制，我们要做的便是守住一颗本真的心，不沉浸于蜗居虚名，而忘记文字本身所具有的唤醒人类良知的作用。作家陈远曾在访谈中这样说道，美的本质是真，倘若过分追求美以致失了真，便背离了写作的方向，先有真然后有美，我手倘若写的不是我心，而是一些矫揉造作的故事，那么美就不会存在于这些文字之中。
先为真人，后为真文，此美之所源也。韩愈笔下的李愿使为一真人，他穷居而野外，升高而望远，坐茂树以终日，濯清泉以自洁，于是他成就了隐士的美名。我想，真存在于每个人心中，而且，这种真实的灵气也会通过文字展现出来。
我手写我心。长杯芳草，喜木美竹，皆可入心，皆可入文。不必拘泥于外在而含真，穿过重重花径，自有云白山青。
内容主要包括：
1. 自我介绍(包括英语能力)
2. 参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家)
3. 希望获准。
3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。
I'm Li Hua, a middle school student fromChina. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I'lI be able to tell students from other countries aboutChinaand learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
Looking forward to your reply!
Regards,
My name is Li Hua, a middle school student fromChina. I’ve learned on the Internet that your summer camp, which is going to be held inSingapore, is round the corner. I am really interested in it.
I, who am active and enjoy various activities, hope to take part in it very much. I know the ability of communication is of great importance and I can speak English quite fluently. In addition, in your camp, there are so many students from different countries. Therefore, I can communicate with the students from different parts of the world. Not only can I introduceChinato them, but I can know more about their countries as well.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
I’m Li Hua, a middle school student fromChina. I have learnt the news on the Internet that you are going to hold a summer camp inSingapore, which I am fond of for a long time. I have been looking forward to being able to not only tell the students from different countries something aboutChina, but learn about some other foreign countries as well.
Besides, I am good at English in school, especially spoken English. Last year, I won the first prize in an English speech contest. I also hope to make some contributions to the friendship between countries.
So I am eager to be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
每个星期二和星期五晚上看到李小姐，一天的辛苦工作之后，我的邻居，在一个公司赶回家，一个秘书，吞下她吃饭然后赶紧去车上她的英语课。李小姐的.情况并非独特，现在越来越多的城市成年人度过他们的业余时间，试图提高自己在学校或学院。
有很多理由可以为他们的教育。有些人，如李小姐，都在做这件事来获得另一个学位或文凭来给社会留下深刻印象。对他们更多的知识，或者说，更多的证书意味着更多的机会，更好的工作和更快的晋升。
其他人，特别是下岗或失业的人去职业学校，准备回到就业市场。他们渴望新的技能，使他们能够胜任在零售行业，管理，教育和其他服务类的工作，他们是奇怪的，因为他们大多是蓝领工人在工厂。
也有人前来参加中国传统医学、绘画、书法、摄影等课程。当他们工作周的时候，人们开始有时间来满足他们对他们内心的渴望的梦想。
出于必要或出于兴趣，人们为了共同的目标去上学，为了提高自己，而这一热潮在成人教育，反过来，有助于提高整个国家的智力水平。
中华五千年的历史，如一条璀璨的星河。回望如梦如幻、人才辈出的大唐，“诗仙”李白可谓是耀眼的明珠。无数荡气回肠、侠风道骨的诗篇，如同号角永远回响在历史的深谷。
我有幸在主题学习中细致了解了青莲居士傲人、浪漫的侠客风采。
“烹羊宰牛且为乐，会须一饮三百杯。”李白的诗，总是透着凛冽的侠客之气。那种冲天豪饮、淡泊名利的生活，怎不令人心驰神往？时而浪漫，时而夸张，虽仕途不济，“天生我材必有用”的自信却永远激励着后人。“古来圣贤皆寂寞，惟有饮者留其名”的豪迈；“长风破浪会有时，直挂云帆济沧海”的豁达；“桃花潭水深千尺，不及汪伦送我情”的深切友谊……无不体现李白侠义、通达的大丈夫气概。李白的诗气势宏伟，境界开阔，令人回味无穷。
在细致的主题学习中，我逐渐领悟了李白的人生境界。接近他，我发现“诗仙”离我们并不遥远。他也有喜怒哀乐，情感与常人无异。从他的身上，我看到了自信、乐观与通达。只要有真才实学、高见卓识，就不必怀疑自己，我们能做得比别人更好，要相信“天生我材必有用”。遇到挫折、麻烦，不要埋怨，更不要害怕，尽自己的全力就好。即使“千金散尽”，仍会“还复来”。在“人生得意”时，要学会包容通达的心态，积极地度过每一天。
我是一条鱼，一条游弋在题海中的鱼。日复一日，年复一年，我感到我的呼吸被扼杀在无边无际的压抑中，眼泪干涸在苦涩的海里，忧郁如流沙般吞噬着我。
我是一只蚂蚁，一只穿梭于城市高楼间的蚂蚁，仰望着来来往往的人群，我躲在面具后独享着一个人的寂寞世界。
……我有眼泪，却不愿把它抛洒在众人面前，不愿有谁看见我的脆弱；我渴望成功，渴望掌声，却极力装作满不在乎……院子里，很静。看着吉他古铜色的琴弦，心中泛起了快乐的涟漪———那是行云流水般的感觉，仿佛世上只有我一人。只有在此时，我才能找到自我与信心。
双手跳跃，音符从指尖流泻而出，偌大的院子里流淌着一首欢乐的歌，裹着浓浓的甜蜜，撞击着我的心扉，仿佛世界上只有琴和我。我很陶醉，因为有了音乐。
曲终，掌声响起……我惊讶得抬起头，院子里站着一个小女孩。“真的，你弹得真棒！原以为你很冷漠，然而黑色的面具下却有一个这么可爱的你，你也是红色的，真高兴重新认识你！”伴随着鼓励和掌声，他走了，留下了惊愕的我和一颗受宠若惊的心。那掌声，给我的心披上了一件毛衣——用理解、关爱和鼓励织成的毛衣，那一刻，有一股落泪的冲动……晚上，我做梦了。那是一个彩色的梦，一个没有眼泪的梦，一个充满掌声的梦……学校里，我又看见了那个女孩，他给我留言，“你也会渴望成功和掌声，相信自己只有尝试才会成功。打开你的心扉，脱下你伪装的冷漠的面具，你也是最优秀最可爱的。掌声就在前方，相信自己，你的明天会更好！阳光永远灿烂！”
几句话语，进入了我内心最深处，似乎有暖暖的液体顺着我的脸颊滴落，碎了……可我分明又看到了梦想的升起，在着我内心奔涌的情感，飞向远方……我感到一丝丝阳光揉进了我的日子里。掌声，又萦绕在耳畔；面具，碎了。
My Memory About Christmas Day
Christmas Day is on December 25th, though it originated in the western country, now it is popular around the world. In China, people will spend that day happily, they will eat apples on Christmas Eve, the children will put the socks so that they could get the presents from Santa Claus. When I went to college, I had an unforgettable memory about my first Christmas Day.
圣诞节在12月5号，虽然圣诞节起源于西方国家，但是如今在世界都很流行。在中国，人们会高兴地过节，他们会在平安夜吃苹果，孩子们会放上袜子，以此来得到圣诞老人的礼物。当我上大学的时候，对于我的第一次过圣诞节，我印象很深刻。
As my major is English, I have many foreign teachers, so that I could have access to the local culture from them. Christmas Day is a big day for them, when the day came, they asked us to spend the day with them, because most of them left home and did not have families around. My classmates and I went to the foreign teacher’s home at that day, we brought some presents, when we arrived at his house, we found a beautiful tree with shinning lights. My teachers taught us how to cook all the cookies, we were having such great fun. I made the cookies with many favors. We talked happily and sung Christmas songs.
由于我的专业是英语，我有很多的外国老师，所以我能从他们身上学到本地文化。圣诞节对于他们来说是个大节日，当那天到来的时候，他们邀请我们去和他谬节，因为他们大部分人离家，没有家人在身边。我的同学和我在那天去了外教家里，我们带上了一些礼物，当我们到达他家里的时候，发现了一颗漂亮的树，树上有闪亮的灯。我的老师教我们如何制作饼干，我们玩得很开心。我制作了很多口味的饼干。我们愉快地聊天，唱起了圣诞歌。
I learned how the foreign people spend their big day, it was such unforgettable for me.
我了解到了外国人是如何度过他们的大节日，让我永生难忘。
Dear leaders and tutors of Southeast University
hello!
First of all, thank you for reading my recommendation book in your busy schedule.
Since entering high school, I have been working hard to learn cultural knowledge and think hard to realize this ideal. English, physics and chemistry are my strong subjects, especially excellent in English. I took part in this year's National English innovation competition for middle school students, and was lucky to enter the second round. Although due to various reasons and the final prize, my ability has been greatly improved.
I not only love computer, in my spare time, I took part in the computer grade examination organized by the Ministry of education and obtained a grade B certificate, but also often actively participate in physical exercise, strong physique, enhance perseverance. In addition, I am warm, cheerful, helpful, sunny, upward, so since high school, I have been rated as three good students every year. However, these achievements can only represent my past. My dream is in my heart, the road is at the foot, and I stand at the crossroads of life. I chose Southeast University. I hope that southeast university can open its arms and provide me with a platform for great development. I hope all leaders and teachers can accept my application. Thank you very much!
Sincerely
Salute
Sponsor
作文一： 一封推荐信 A letter of recommendation
Dear Brown：
It is my pleasure to recommend Li Ming, my good friend, for his application to work in your company. Li Ming graduated from Beijing Industry University.
His major is Computer Software. During the four years'study he has done a good job. Every year he got the first grade scholarship. And he also has got the title of the Excellent Graduate.
He is an enthusiastic and progressive young man with high potentiality. He is not only quick at learning but also good at solving difficult problems with logical mind. I am sure that it will benefit your company if he can work for your company. I strongly recommend him to your company.
Wang Lin
亲爱的布朗：
我很高兴推荐我的好朋友李明在您的公司工作。李明毕业于北京工业大学。他的专业是计算机软件。在四年的学习中，他的功课非常优秀。
每年他都获得一等奖学金，而且他已经获得了优秀毕业生的称号。
他是一个热情、积极上进、具有很大潜力的年轻人。他不仅学习快而且善于用逻辑解决难题。我相信如果他能进入你们公司工作，会给你们公司带来很多好处。我强力推荐他到你们公司。
您的朋友 王林
作文二：一封推荐信
I am very glad to recommend Li Ming, my good friend, for a job in your company. He is a graduate from Beijing Industry University.
His major is Computer Software. In the past four years he has got the first grade scholarship for four times. And this year he got the title of the Excellent Graduate.
He not only studies well but also has great capacity. He is good at solving difficult problems with logical mind. I think that he has great potentialities.
If he can join the company, he will be able to give full play to his talent. And your company will also be greatly benefited. I strongly recommend Li Ming to your company.
亲爱的布朗，
我很高兴推荐我的好朋友李明在您的.公司工作。李明是北京工业大学的一名毕业生。他的专业是计算机。在过去四年里，他得了四次一等奖学金，而且今年他获得了优秀毕业生的称号。
他不仅学习好而且有很强的能力。他善于用逻辑解决难题，我认为他有很大潜力。
如果他能进入你们公司工作，他就能够展现他的才能，你们公司也会受益匪浅。我强力推荐他到你们公司。
床头，总是放着一本书，闲时顺手翻阅，体味另外一种的闲情逸致，用一个个恬淡的文字把生活的幸福与忧伤一点点地串起，捡拾起在岁月中遗失的美好……
倾心细读时，会把如丁香花一样美丽的姑娘，驻留在漫长的雨港，一笑而过，能在记忆的路口等待渐渐清晰的朦胧。泪水，并不代表忧伤；微笑，也并不表示欢畅，在别人的故事里行走着自己的路，也是一种快乐和舒适，用墨香来恬淡怜愉悦自己的精神世界，为心灵悄然开启一扇通往阔路上的长廊，从春花读到秋月，从夏雨读到冬雪，在岁月寂然的交替中，在时光匆匆的交行里，把心里的'默契痛快淋漓地发挥，于无怨无悔中，在书香里快乐行走。
微风拂面处的怡然自得，风霜雪中的起起伏伏一波三折的动情，人世苍凉的慨叹，都不失为一种心情和感动。
一本书的厚度衡量不了一颗心的从容，而一颗心的从容却把握得了一本书的厚度，让我们豁然开朗的，也许只是一句话，左右我们心情的；也许，只是一页纸，而拥有这一切。
在于我们是否把这作为开户心房的钥匙，在不知不觉间打开一扇窗，照进阳光的颜色，泛着七彩的波影，被温暖地包围着，荣绕着，如光泽透明；在潜移默化中开户一扇门，流水潺潺的溪水，澄澈地荡涤着心扉，被明确地流涤着，如水样澄清。
敞开心扉，让心情在阳光下晾晒，其实，并不冷，尘封一段往事，折叠成岁月形状，允许日子在花开花落，云卷舒中定格成美丽的风景，找开书页的瞬间，飘落下来的泛黄纸笺，上面是否记载一段早已遗忘曾经的誓言?心在淡淡流敞的音乐中温习一段久违世界，上？笺上寻找往日的柔情，心湖泛动的阵阵涟漪，激荡起的波动里会映出谁的身影？
无声的岁月悠悠而过，散落成生活的美好如影随形，能够温暖心扉的，永远是安宁的文字，在历练中雅致地挥洒一言一行，在纯粹中潇洒地展露一颦一笑，穿过岁月的风尘，在寂寞中聆听孤独的歌声，出简单的幸福完善复杂的人生。
择着一本厚厚的书，静坐在桌前，出平淡的真实来引领自身的安详，在宁静中自省，在淡泊中升华，思索和接纳的永远都是心灵的回声。生活的发奋中濡染，生活在书香中濡染，生活发出来的韵致和美丽如兰一样芬芳；这，就是我们走在这个世界上的最优雅的痕迹。
信笔涂鸦，随心而写。
如今游走在3点1线的高中生活中，再回首往昔轻快的时光，恍如隔世。
风吹桃花红满地，乱红幽浅随水流。
小时爱去小园，小园中，栽了一棵桃树，傍于溪水边。阳春三月，春暖花开。桃花枝头的蓓蕾惊醒了，东一支，西一支，那些嫣然微笑的花朵，喷出醉人芳香。几日过后，满枝花朵站在枝头，一阵风拂过，花飞满天，落英缤纷，粉红色的花瓣落在桃花树下，更有些落入水中。正所谓落花无情，流水有意。潺潺流水，带着花瓣发出清脆悦耳的声音，那是笑，神的笑，美的像水的映影，风的轻歌；那是笑，，诗的笑，画的笑，云的留痕，浪的柔波。
竹影扫阶尘不动，月穿池底水无痕。
中秋佳节，亲友团聚，我们一起吃月饼，赏月。大人的世界，我们小孩子不懂，所以当时我喜欢一个人坐在石阶下，冰凉的触感，使我困倦的双眼清醒，修长的竹子在月光里，映照在石阶上，竹叶在石阶上摇曳着。我不禁想起，庭下如积水空明，水中藻荇交横，盖竹柏影也。我真想尝尝月儿的味道，一定很甜，很香。
夜幕新荷满璀璨，漫天星光散苍穹。
虫鸣声织成一片静，静夜空中繁星耀眼，忽闪忽闪的，像镶嵌了，一颗颗钻石。没有数过星星因为我知道，数也数不完，万物似乎都睡着了，就那满天星星，坚守自己的岗位，照样行人都路我枕着星星，进入梦乡。梦，我梦见了漫天星光，还有有一种花叫满天星，我喜欢它的细细碎碎，更因为看着他就像拥有整片星海。记得小时候听过一首歌谣:一闪一闪亮晶晶，漫天都是小星星，挂在天空放光明，好像许多小眼睛
银光素裹凋碧树，寒风斜峭结冰凌。
百花凋残，冬雪覆盖，洋洋洒洒的雪花，随着飒飒的寒风，漫天飞舞。世界白茫茫一片，让人分不清哪是天，哪是地，虽然没有:望长城内外，惟余莽莽，大河上下，顿失滔滔的壮丽辽阔，但却别有一番洞天。屋檐下的冰棱参差不齐的，挂在瓦边上，晶莹剔透如同水晶。风吹来，树上的银条和雪球都一直往下落，摔的粉身碎骨。雪轻落，最美最快消融，遥望中，一丝一丝心痛。
流水已渐渐清寒，只是时光不还。
Mrs Wilson ,
Im going out shopping , and wont be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the city library . At about 1 oclock this afternoon , Tracy called ,saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to . She felt very sorry about that , but said that you could set some other time for the meeting . She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home . She has already told Susan about this change.
LI Hua
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