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As everyone knows, the information age has brought us countless benefits, but when it comes to its major advantage, people may hold different views. As for me, the major advantage of the Information Age is that it makes it easy for individuals to have instant access to all kinds of information. In the past, for instance, if a student was meant to compose a thesis, he was supposed to bury himself in piles of books in the library, and probably after several days’ or even several months’ searching, he still could not find the materials he wanted. But now it is a totally different story. The advanced techniques of the information age have spared us all those troubles. What we need to do is just sit in front of the computer and search for our target information on the Internet rather than struggle painfully in numerous books. More excitingly, we don’t have to waste several days or even months waiting. Usually the information we need will be transferred to us in seconds. The information age can not only bring convenience to students in searching of materials, but also help people in all walks of life, save their energy and enhance their efficiency. Now since we’re in an economy based around the manipulation of information, I have every reason to believe that this advantage of the information age will play an even greater role in the future.
As is vividly depicted in the drawing,three birds are standing on the another bird is standing on the other side without wire,with its whole body floating in the of the three
birds says:”he’s got wifi’
By depicting this the image,the drawer attempts to expose the popularity of wifi every coin has two sides,so does the one hand,it makes it possible for a wireless-enabled computer or personal digital assistant to connect to the Internet almost time,anywhere,making our life more convenient and interesting And with the development of society,free wifi will be available in may more places,which will make it cheaper for us to surf the the other hand,access points could be used to steal personal information transmitted form wifi users and there is still room for improvement in the signal strength of wifi.
Generally speaking,only when we make the most of the advantages of wifi and get rid of its.
disadvantages,will it benefit us.
On the popularity of wifi
Generally speaking,only when we make the most of the advantages of wifi and get rid of its
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往年专四作文着重分为两种类型，而其中最值得关注的是第二种类型，但总的来说无论哪种类型，考察的都是学生提取信息、遣词造句、输出观点的能力。（以下范文来自华研外语）
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如图所示，这篇作文只能得7分，得分较低。其中内容阐述能力满分10分，缩写部分满分5分，讨论部分5分，此作文这10分只能得3分。
此作文缩写不符合要求，因为没有用自己的话言概括材料的要点，依然套用正反两种相反观点的写法（some in favor...some against），审题不清，没有按要求写作，所以缩写部分只得1分。
讨论内容跑题，疑似将term-time holidays 理解为“呆在家不上学”，比如作文中写道：Children is too young to learn by themselves. When they stay at home alone, they must waste lots of time. 所以讨论部分只得2分。
篇章组织能力满分3分，此作文只得了1分，其总体层次划分基本合理，但全文衔接手段不够丰富、自然。
语言运用满分7分，此作文语言错误、语法错误极多，所以语言语用能力只得了3分。比如，作文中第二段的
for on thing, 正确表达应为 for one thing;
children is 此处主谓不一致，正确表达应为 children are；
作文最后一段最后一句话：
Not only bad for children, but also the whole family.
这句话是破碎句，即sentence fragment, 不是一个完整的句子，有明显的语法错误。
文中语法错误还有很多，不再一一列举，可见，如果基本语法不过关，就没办法遣词造句，作文中布满了语法错误，这样的作文很难得高分。
在写summary时，为了表明自己所写内容是和材料紧密结合在一起的，大家可以使用下列短语或句型：
The excerpt tells us that…
According to the excerpt,
The excerpt indicates that…
From the excerpt, we can have a better understanding of…
As the excerpt indicates…
The except reveals that…
From the excerpt, we know/find that...
excerpt是摘录的意思，可根据题干上的字眼将这个词汇换成report, survey等。比如2018年专四真题作文题干上就用的是report.
Should Universities Give Priority to Practical Courses for Students?
Because of the demands in the job market, students with _hot_ degrees such as computer science or finance are more likely to get a job than students with a _cold_ degree like geography. Some people say that universities should give priority to practical courses for students. But I think that traditional courses are equally important and universities should not give priority to practical courses.
First, both practical and traditional courses are needed in our country. Students who do well in different courses can help to develop different aspects of our country after their graduation. For example, our society needs not only people who can help to develop economy and technology, but also people who can contribute themselves to literature and education. Second, if universities give priority to practical courses, more students will choose those _hot_ degrees. When these students graduate, they will have to fight harder for a job because there will be too many applicants with the same degrees. This will in turn cause an imbalance of supply and demand in the job market.
In one word, both practical courses and traditional courses are important, and universities should not give priority to either side.
My younger cousin got in trouble at school for kicking some other students. When asked why he did it, he responded that he had been imitating his favorite cartoon character. He had seen this behavior and decided to act similarly. His parents had enormous difficulties getting him to stop. This showed me that TV shows can be more influential than parents. Finally, young people often feel like they have nothing in common with their parents, so their parents' influence in their live decreases. Young people think their parents do. For example, many parents are not as proficient as their children are at using modern technology. They might not even know how to surf the Internet or use an MP3 player. This gap in knowledge makes it very hard for them to find common ground with their parents. In conclusion, modern media and the world of technology have much stronger influences on young people than their parents do. As young people get more absorbed in television, movies celebrities, and their friends, parents should expect to continue losing more control over their believe that outside influences have stronger effects on young people than their parents do. This, however, is a mistaken belief.
Ways to Get Over Information Explosion As a popular saying goes, _A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention.
随着信息爆炸的流行，人们说：“信息的丰富性造成了人们的关注，如今我们正处于信息爆炸的时代。
_ Nowadays we are in an era of information explosion.
越来越多的人抱怨他们在信息时代迷失了。
More and more people complain that they are lost in the information age.
Admittedly, no one can deny the fact that the new information age has brought us so much convenience that we are allowed to get plenty of information just with a simple click sitting in front of the computers.
尽管如此，我们也很困惑、不安、心烦意乱、心烦意乱的是一个令人难以置信的大量的信息。
Nevertheless we are also confused, annoyed, distracted and upset by an incredibly large quantity of information.
For example, when searching for something online, people are easily misguided by irrelevant information and forget their original plan.
此外，一些信息往往是无用的。
Besides, some information often turns out to be useless.
因此，它可能是耗时和麻烦的搜索信息在线。
Therefore, it may be time-consuming and troublesome to search information online.
那么我们可以做什么来避免被不相干的信息分散?
Then what can we do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information?
以下是一些有用的建议：首先，在你的搜索前，列出你想要的。
Here are some useful tips: Firstly, make a list of what you really want before your searching.
你可以通过这种方式避免一些有吸引力的，但不相关的'信息。
You can avoid some appealing, yet irrelevant information by this way.
Future trend in computer science is one of the artificial intelligence. Artificial Intelligence is a new science of researching theories, methods and technologies in simulating or developing thinking process of human beings. It including the research in the field of robotics, speech recognition, image recognition, Natural language processing and expert systems.
AI is an embranchment of Computer Science, and it is foreland of research field of computer science. The field of AI research was founded at a conference on the campus of Dartmouth College in the summer of intelligence has the impact in natural science. The need of using mathematic computer to solve the problem, AI brings many benefits. Artificial intelligence has the impact in economy, the expert system more depth in all, to bring the great benefit. AI also promoted the development of the computer industry, but at the same time, also brought the problem of employment services.
With the development of artificial intelligence and intelligent robot, we have to say, artificial intelligence is advanced research, so it may touch the bottom lines of ethics. I believe that the science of artificial intelligence is waiting for humanity to explore the real connotation.
Crisis is to our life what illness is to our body. Just as fatal disease can destroy our body and sometimes even put an end to our lives, so does smashing crisis knock us down so hopelessly that we might never have chance of standing up again. However, most crises that frequent us in life are not such category. They, like occasional ailments which sometimes can bolster our body's immune system, are mostly minor and surmountable and therefore making us hardy enough to survive whatever adversities in our later life. Even those serious crises, if handled properly, can be turned to a blessing to us, too.
As far as a nation is concerned, crisis can be rendered beneficial. Take Wenchuan earthquake which shook most of Sichuan recently for example. The crisis has cost us Chinese a lot. Houses collapsed, bridges broke down and many affected areas were cut off from the outside world. Nearly a million people lost their homes, ten thousands of people were injured and another ten thousands of people were killed. But our sufferings won't go in vain. Scientists are more determined to improve the means by which we forecast earthquakes with more accuracy. We should build houses which can survive the destructive earthquakes. And we also should better the mechanism to face the emergencies and crisis.
As for economic life, crises are not always rendered bad. During these times, we can stop the race of fast economy to speculate about some fundamental issues of humanity such as how much high-speed development in this way can contribute to the well-being of human life. Just take my own country for instance. Of course, in the past two decades or so, our economy has gained the highest speed man has experienced. But haven't we paid too much? Our rivers are polluted. Our natural resources are shrinking. Our national power of creation is drained. Is it worthy of it? Isn't it high time we gave it a serious thought? Shouldn't we stop making ourselves long in quantity and short in quality? And chance of deep thought has come with this crisis, which is now deepening in most parts of the world.
Crisis sometimes contributes to our life treasure in a way that few can imagine. It can weather us and make us strong enough to face ourselves when we feel weak. Eric, my uncle is a case in point. He had hard time in his childhood going through such a fatal disease that he had never thought he could survive. He was in due course saved by doctors. Ever since then he regarded his life as a second given by God and has been so grateful to the world that he has been doing whatever he can to give back in the same measure to other fellows. And now he is living a happy and successful life.
As a well-known ancient Chinese notion goes, the past lessons if not forgotten can be good teachers for us all. If we can bear in mind the various sufferings and ordeals we have experienced, then our sufferings will not go unrewarded and those of our compatriots who was killed in the earthquake did not die in vain. We should take the lessons from crisis and regard them as a chance for new growth.
water is very important for living things. without water there can be no life on earth.
as we can see, the world population is growing rapidly day by day. so enough fresh water is needed to feed such a big population. what's more, with the development of industry, factories and vehicles produce poisonous gases or wastes, which consequently results in the pollution of water. though fresh, a good amount of it can no longer be used. only quite limited fresh water resource is available to human beings. so it's high time for us human beings to take quick action to protect water resource. stop pollution and save water, otherwise, we cannot survive on the earth.
with fresh water, the world will be prosperous.
water is the source of can't live without the increasing population and industrial development,water pollution has become a serious amounts of wastewater go into rivers and seas directly without being treated,which can be dangerous to lots of people pay no attention to saving water in daily life,while in some place water is badly needed.
it's time for us to take some measures to improve the should treat the wastewater before letting it go into can play a positive role in saving example we can reuse the water for wishing rice to wash vegetables and then clean a mop.
water is indispensable to our life and the development of national economy. it is often described as the source of all living things and the lifeblood of agriculture and industry. without it, nothing could grow and out world would become a terrible desert.
the world we live in is now faced with a severe shortage of fresh water. according to some official figures, more than 1,700 million people in the world don't have enough clear water to drink and over 25 thousand people die of water related diseases daily.
so, all of us should actively b save water. it's our obligation for the benefit of the future generations.
类型二：材料篇章类型
以2018年的题目为例
（2018）
Read carefully the following report, and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should:
You can support yourself with information form the report
第一段：①完成要求1：总结提取材料内容（见第三部分）；②完成要求2 ：评价Stephen的两个观点；③表明自己的立场
第二段：提出论据——支撑自己论点的原因（每个论据一定要有一句清晰明了的一句话，让老师能够一眼看到 你到底写的是什么）;这点和类型一类似，但有所不同的是 论据可以从材料中找出
第三段：总结：用不同的话重新陈述自己的观点、立场。
范文：
The Plight of Conservation and the Way Out
Tribal peoples are reported to be evicted from their ancestral homelands in the name of environmental conservation and national interests.（总结提取材料内容：表明现象以及提取原因） 【套句1】I personally agree with the view of Stephen Corry that the rights of tribal peoples should be respected and that indigenous peoples should be recognized for their profound knowledge of protecting their own lands.（提取Stephen的两个观点，并表明自己的立场）.
First, the right of tribal peoples to live in their own lands should not be violated.（论点1） They inhabited in a land long before it was conquered and it is inhumane to force them to leave. Displacing indigenous peoples severs their tie with their sacred world, thus destroying their cultural heritage so inextricably bound up with these sites. In addition, tribal peoples have been living in their lands for such a long period of time that they know very well the association of their cultural heritage and traditions with their lands. （论点2）By contrast, the outsiders are not necessarily aware of the hidden link and may destroy tribal landscapes, for instance, by forcible introduction of modern concrete construction and lifestyles.（正反对比论证） 【套句2】Therefore, for better protection of tribal landscapes and cultures, tribal peoples should be granted the right to protect their own environment.
【套句3】Overall, not only should the rights of tribal peoples be respected, but also their role in protecting their own lands should be maintained.（总结）
提取精华：
短语：
套句：
类型一：Yes or No
这里以我认为几篇范文中最佳的2013篇为例
（2013）
Nowadays, such new ways of consumption as coupons, online group-buying have emerged. Will new ways of shopping really make us smart customers? The following are the opinions of two different groups. Read carefully the opinions from both sides and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should first summarize briefly the opinions from both sides and give your view on the issue.
第一段：①由一句社会现象引入正反方观点；②分别具体指出正反方的观点；③提出自己的立场
第二段：提出论据——支撑自己论点的原因（每个论据一定要有一句清晰明了的一句话，让老师能够一眼看到 你到底写的是什么）
第三段：总结：①先迂回承认对方的可取之处；②用一个转折，表明重申自己的立场
My Views on New Ways of Consumption
【套句1】Nowadays, in this consumption-oriented society, there are a growing number of people pursuing new ways of consumption.（由社会现象引出话题）【套句2】Some in favor of it, contending that such practice is money-saving and time-saving.（正方观点） Some object to it because coupons, group-buying deals are often deceptive and we may be tempted to buy unnecessary goods on impulse.（反方观点） From my perspective, such new ways of consumption will lead to waste and irrational customers.（自己的立场）
First of all, the satisfaction of saving money on one commodity will greatly stimulate consumers’ desire to buy more.（论点1：省钱的满足感刺激消费欲望）【套句3】 It is easy to presume that more money will be spent eventually. Similarly, at the sight of such a low price, many consumers tend to lose their mind and come back home with packages of unnecessary goods.（论点2：失去理智，购买非必需品） It is absolutely a waste of money. Last but not least, many consumers are passionate enough to purchase piles of group-buying coupons without realizing that there are many unpleasant additional clauses attached to them.（论点3：令人不快的附加条件） For instance, many restaurant coupons can only be used at a certain time with certain specified dishes, which can hardly be called a satisfactory consumption experience.
【套句4】To conclude, there’s no denying that these fashionable ways of consumption can to some extent help us save money.（先承认另一方的部分可取之处，再转折） However, a much greater amount of money will be spent if we are indulged in using them. We will never become truly smart consumers if we don’t spend money rationally.（总结重申观点）
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